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Attempt 1
This photo is really grainy, but I don't like the effect because its so even, you can tell its post production. Also the photo is very flat, with little highlights and shadows, its mostly mid-tones.
Attempt 2
This photo looks really old and grainy, Its very bright and almost blowing out the face of the model. Its also lost sharpness in the eyes. Its my least favorite of the photos.
Attempt 3
I personally find this is the best one, other than the specks underneath her chin, although it does add an effect of it being old and battered. The sharpness is all the same within the photo, but the background is blurred. I added slight grain to the photo, and made her face very pale and smooth, while her jacket adds more contrast to the photo.
Hi Stephanie:
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#1 Excellent writing and observations 9/10
#2 I like the top one also, captures the magic light of Mann. Good effort.
18/20